Oh yeah, now you're getting the idea, Chris!
You asked for critiques and you got em and you took them to heart and made it much more refined, without losing the character of your pipe.
While 'warts and all' approaches are fine, what you're doing is refining your skills.
You've already come a long way, baby!
I'm curious as to how you think the change has affected the ergonomics? Do you think it felt better in hand with the shank belly?