Excellent work! Great 2nd effort. From the photo the shank/stem connection looks smooth. Finish is nice, symmetry is great, maybe a little to much "chin". Take a little off the bottom/front of the bowl and I think that will improve the proportion. Just my .02 cents.
No matter how long we've been making pipes, we're all trying to refine our skills. Constantly. You learn something with every pipe.
Here's a classic Bulldog I'm working on. Almost finished except for final sanding/staining/buffing.
This is my third attempt at the Bulldog. Difficult shape to get just right.
I made it from PME Tuscan Ebauchon. Great wood w/ minimal sand pits:
Here's a freehand I recently finished:
Freehands are easy to make, just go with the flow. Making standard/classic shapes is far more challenging and educating.
Keep at it, you definitely have talent.
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