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cynicismandsugar

Part of the Furniture Now
Nov 17, 2015
773
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Springfield, Mo
Dawn peaks its listless amber beams through Spring's windowpane;

A birth from birth, baptized by spark of virgin flame.

Smoldering leaf, cradled in briar's immaculate grain;

Fair sibling to maiden chalice, lavished in crimson stain.
Its leaves whisper the promised secrets to flesh and bone;

And so, the first page is splayed within immortal tome.

Yet, untold chapters shall lay forever unknown;

An endless kingdom built upon visceral stone.
A young, bright Summer's day and its fresh, fragrant breeze;

Desire quenched easily by fertile ground and healthy seed.

Oh, to inhale all its wonderment with relative ease!

A voracious soul that only ruby-red sacrament can appease.
Constant reminder is the cruel parchment and ink;

That after the lavish banquette, a dessert of bitter defeat.

One more memorial toast, sealed with silent clink;

But, for now, comforting is the warmth of fire and drink.
The haze of dusk, and with it, slithers Autumn's tranquil bite;

As the exhausted breaths of phantasm vapor aspire to rise.

Ablaze are the leaves, burning brilliantly in their glories spite;

Brief are the artist's gifts of passionate fire and elixir-ed delight.
Upon the reader, corporeal fortunes are generously cast;

And beat by beat, the priceless treasures amass.

But, encased within the pages, stitched up in history's past;

The hidden lesson: fragrance, taste and tales seldom last.
Midnight shadows blanket beneath Winter's frigid gale;

No crops left to harvest ― nor sacred desires to quell.

Our spirits become wisp, when the smoldering embers undoubtedly fail;

And, with a final sip, we are commended to a single line within this enduring tale.
This tattered volume ― bound in blood, leather and twine:

A fine testament to the relentless march of all humankind;

But, even within its own life, lessons and all things divine ―

There has ultimately been more truth in ashes and wine.

 

michaelmirza

Part of the Furniture Now
Oct 21, 2015
638
0
Chicago, IL
How has this gone a full day without any comments?! Rich and stirring poetry with an obvious mastery of wordplay. Brilliant.
Which book are writing about? Any in particular or is it intentionally ambiguous? (I have my guesses). :puffpipe:

 

gogosamgo

Starting to Get Obsessed
Mar 5, 2015
244
0
How has this gone a full day without any comments?!
My thoughts exactly! Great work Jeffrey! I used to dabble in writing some poetry years ago, and you may have inspired me to pick it back up again :)

 

randelli

Part of the Furniture Now
Nov 21, 2015
914
5
I would hazard to guess that the book is the author's life, with a future to be written, and experiences that have been memorialized.

 

cynicismandsugar

Part of the Furniture Now
Nov 17, 2015
773
4
Springfield, Mo
I would like to thank everyone that took time out to actually read this never-ending piece; and twice the gratitude to those who took an additional moment to comment.
Michael, if I were to actually address any of the intended meanings/topics of the poem, it would rob the reader of their personalized experience... so, as with most of my work, it is ambiguous.
Gogoasamgo, go for it! I'm honored to encourage any compulsion for self expression!
Randelli... a lil' of this, a lil' of that. :wink:

 
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