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griffonwing

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Nov 12, 2014
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Hey fellow puffers. I have a poem that I wrote several years ago back in college. I was trying my hand at the "ode", a semi-complex rhyme scheme (AB-AB-CDE-CDE). Anyway, the subject was the Civil War. So, in honor of Memorial Day...

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ODE TO A BATTLE LOST IN TIME</p>
<p>Yon hill ahead, deserted of its fame,<br />
  Holds memories of heaven and of hell.<br />
For it was here two thousand soldiers came,<br />
  And here only a few would live to tell.<br />
With bayonets and smoke, and gunfire blazed,<br />
  And men's lives lost whose life had just begun,<br />
    The blood that spilled and filled o're crimson pools,<br />
Along the ruined land that they had razed.<br />
  The acts occured that day can't be undone,<br />
    Nor make, again, of stones and bones,grand jewels.</p>
<p>The smoking guns, the choking of the throats,<br />
  The cavalry, a-stand from row to row,<br />
And firing in the midst of dark blue coats,<br />
  Start felling brothers down, injustice show.<br />
Among the haze of battle left and right,<br />
  Great screams are heard from friends and comrades near.<br />
    What horror must be eating them inside?<br />
What ghastly manner urging them to fight?<br />
  What strength had them to manage 'gainst their fear?<br />
    No answer can there be except for pride.</p>
<p>A country split asunder, halved in two.<br />
  Their pride allowing them to lose control.<br />
A bitter choice, but no-one really knew<br />
  The conflict would end in so great a toll.<br />
But hist'ry has a way of echoing,<br />
  A way of duplicating past events.<br />
    I hope that we, the lesson learned, entomb,<br />
Our brothers, those who fought and died that spring.<br />
  And giving thought, I feel we've come far, since<br />
    On that hill, now, a garden grows full bloom.</p>
<p>A R Swartz<br />


 
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