Paper I wrote, recently

[collindow]

Paper
Any opinions on this? I turned it in to a teacher who may or may not be anti-smoking. The rest of the class certainly is.

And you may or may not notice that I've been posting more tonight than I have in quite a long time...well...I've been busy. And now I'm procrastinating on another paper for the same class he he.
Edit: Link broke. Fixed it.

 

[kcvet67]

Well put Collin.

 

[markw4mms]

Nice paper, I just hope the teacher is not anti enough to give you a bad grade based on his/her opinion on tobacco use.

 

[collindow]

We'll see, I suppose. The "midterm" tomorrow is a conference on my writing thus far. I suppose I'll find out then.

 

[puffy]

Though they're not supposed to teachers sometimes tend to look more favorably on papers they agree with.Maybe this one isn't biased...Hope you do well.

 

[tslex]

Are you familiar with Godwin's Law?

 

[rigmedic1]

Very intersting and informative. Thanks for sharing! Good luck!

 

[mlaug]

LOL @ tslex! :laughat:
Colin - Good luck with your paper!

 

[pipeinhand]

With as much tax revenue that the government gets from tobacco you would think they would be mute on the issue. The goose may die yet.
Now for something completely different. Nazi.
"Remember Basil, don't say anything about the war."

 

[morlader]

A good paper Colin.Hope you get a good grade,if you don't then the teacher is biased.

 

[papipeguy]

I admire your courage for writing something that goes against the liberal establishment's sentiments. The majority of people are afraid of numbers and don't know how to read them or digest them. If I understand correctly, you are being judged on your writing ability and, supposedly, not your political or societal bent. Guess you'll see on what merits you'll be judged. Good luck and keep writing about things that matter to you.

The world needs thoughtful writing and passion. Do not succumb to the mainstream.

All the best,

John

 

[pipetrucker]

A very well written and compelling piece. Thanks for sharing it.

 

[pstlpkr]

That was a fun paper, and informative.

It's a shame however; that it will have a very limited audience, we here, and the professor.
We here in the choir love being preached to.

Keep up the good work.

 

[nbpiper]

Good work on the paper, enjoyed reading it. Hope you get a good grade on it.

 

[spartan]

Second page, last sentence. You do not need the "is" there.
Great paper. Liked the jab at the end in the notes... but the person grading your paper will think you just called them a Nazi lol. I would have just left the Nazi Reference and not connected the dots FOR them. :rofl: