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  1. madmurdoc

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    Had I the heavens' embroidered cloths,
    Enwrought with golden and silver light,
    The blue and the dim and the dark cloths
    Of night and light and the half-light,
    I would spread the cloths under your feet:
    But I, being poor have only my dreams;
    I have spread my dreams under your feet;
    Tread softly because you tread on my dreams.

    W.B. Yeats

    “The same hand that can write a beautiful poem, can knock you out with one punch—that's Poetic Justice.”
    ― "Irish" Wayne Kelly
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  2. tjameson

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    My wife is a poet. She's currently in her last year of a masters program at St. Mary's College of California. She has an amazing mind and is very precise in her words. Ill ask her if I can post some work up.

    BLACKBLOODs for life...just please keep making Black House!
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    Tjameson,

    My best friend teaches at St Mary's. Small world!

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  4. crazypipe

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    On Prayer
    Kahlil Gibran

    You pray in your distress and in your need; would that you might pray also in the fullness of your joy and in your days of abundance.

    For what is prayer but the expansion of yourself into the living ether?
    And if it is for your comfort to pour your darkness into space, it is also for your delight to pour forth the dawning of your heart.
    And if you cannot but weep when your soul summons you to prayer, she should spur you again and yet again, though weeping, until you shall come laughing.
    When you pray you rise to meet in the air those who are praying at that very hour, and whom save in prayer you may not meet.
    Therefore let your visit to that temple invisible be for naught but ecstasy and sweet communion.
    For if you should enter the temple for no other purpose than asking you shall not receive:
    And if you should enter into it to humble yourself you shall not be lifted:
    Or even if you should enter into it to beg for the good of others you shall not be heard.
    It is enough that you enter the temple invisible.

    I cannot teach you how to pray in words. God listens not to your words save when He Himself utters them through your lips.
    And I cannot teach you the prayer of the seas and the forests and the mountains.
    But you who are born of the mountains and the forests and the seas can find their prayer in your heart,
    And if you but listen in the stillness of the night you shall hear them saying in silence,
    "Our God, who art our winged self, it is thy will in us that willeth.

    It is thy desire in us that desireth.
    It is thy urge in us that would turn our nights, which are thine, into days which are thine also.
    We cannot ask thee for aught, for thou knowest our needs before they are born in us:
    Thou art our need; and in giving us more of thyself thou givest us all."

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  5. brewshooter

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    I used to know quite a number of fine poems and limericks. There was this really great one celebrating the exploits of a particular man from Nantucket. I wish I could remember how that went.

    Of all tyrannies, a tyranny sincerely exercised for the good of its victims may be the most oppressive. It would be better to live under robber barons than under omnipotent moral busybodies. The robber baron's cruelty may sometimes sleep, his cupidity may at some point be satiated; but those who torment us for our own good will torment us without end for they do so with the approval of their own conscience.
    -C. S. Lewis, English essayist & juvenile novelist (1898 - 1963)
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  6. tjameson

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    Here is one I wrote awhile back.

    Amber shifts gray
    Midnight sky brightens in blinks
    To d'or morning haze
    Then quickly to cumulous couplings
    Reflecting past presents
    Past life, lives
    Cast off in pooling conciousness
    Collected from descending bodily impressions
    In the moss bed
    infinite remembrance
    Frequencies of faint abstraction
    Solidify to sinuous spines
    Coats of browning birch bark
    Forests whispering in resounding
    Solidarity, amid the wash of universal
    Calamitous peace
    Slipping in small measure
    Out cracks in the creek bed crossing
    Nature nurtures nothing
    Naturally we remember
    all is nothing nowhere

    Posted 4 months ago #
  7. smokeybear

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    I my self was a poet had a few published ill put them up tomorrow for you guys might as well share them.

    Pack and lite, hope for no bite. Tamp and Dottle, Pour from the Bottle. Sit back and smell, Ah..All is well"
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  8. ichbinmuede

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    The quarrel of the sparrows in the eaves,
    The full round moon and the star-laden sky,
    And the loud song of the ever-singing leaves,
    Had hid away earth's old and weary cry.

    And then you came with those red mournful lips,
    And with you came the whole of the world's tears,
    And all the sorrows of her labouring ships,
    And all the burden of her myriad years.

    And now the sparrows warring in the eaves,
    The curd-pale moon, the white stars in the sky,
    And the loud chaunting of the unquiet leaves
    Are shaken with earth's old and weary cry.

    -W.B. Yeats, The Sorrow of Love

    I'm also a Yeats sort of guy. Just can't get enough of the dark sort of spin that he was capable of putting on things.

    "Enjoy every sandwich." -Warren Zevon
    Best advice that I've ever heard.
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  9. brian64

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    @Teddy: Thanks for the Gibran post...significant insights to meditate on therein.

    Ancient Sufi proverb:

    God sleeps in the rock, dreams in the plant, stirs in the animal, and awakens in man.

    (or at lest potentially awakens in man, I would add...imo, none of us are actually awake)

    "What we observe is not nature itself, but nature exposed to our method of questioning." -- Werner Heisenberg
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  10. hobie1dog

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    Too deep for me.

    Want to get raped? bank with Wells Fargo, the worlds biggest Criminals

    Does a culture based on seperation and competition, of scientific sophistication and mideval religion, offer happiness even as it ravishes the Earth that sustains it?
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  11. smokeybear

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    i wrote this for my high school sweetheart, It must have been pretty good cause shes now my Wife

    I Shall Not Pick

    By Andrew Askandar

    I've picked many Flowers,
    I've smelt many peddles,
    But none were abloom.

    Until I came upon a Rose,
    Blooming, showing off its beauty,
    Opening its peddles as if,
    Inviting me to its sweet herbal scent.
    As if, it was opening itself to me.

    Then it hit me like sunlight breaking
    Through the forest trees,
    This is a Rose I shall not pick,
    But shall admire and be thankful,
    For this Rose not only bloomed in my eyes,
    But bloomed inside of me.

    Posted 3 months ago #
  12. spartan

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    Roses are red,
    Violets are red,
    Daisies are red,
    Sunflowers are red,
    Oh my God my garden is on fire.

    -Unknown
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    I'm no poet. But I'm liking what I see. I do love the way Cradle Of Filth puts dark poetry to interesting music...

    "I was born to lose. So I'll die to win." -Breaking Benjamin
    Posted 3 months ago #
  13. scottishjohn

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    That is a beautiful poem that you wrote smokeybear. A very insightfull and sensitive person you are. Hang on to her, she is a keeper! If the poem led to your eventual union she too is very insightfull and sensitive. These type of people are rare in this world.

    I have some friends. Some honest friends, and honest friends are few;
    My pipe of briar, my open fire, A book that's not too new......
    Robert Service
    Posted 3 months ago #
  14. smokeybear

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    Since you all seem to be in the darker poems here's my version of dark its one of me later pieces (college)

    The Last Remaining Light,
    The Moon as evil as it Seems.
    Do I run towards It,
    Or standout the silent Screams.

    The eyes of creatures gaze at me,
    They might attack me Soon.
    I trip on the root of a tree,
    As I ran towards the Moon.

    The warm inviting Moonlight quickly froze,
    Leaving cold and at the tip of Evils Nose.

    And in this light i can see,
    I am in Evils sight as the Enemy.
    But with this light,
    I shall Stand and Fight,
    For No Evil Can Touch Me.

    By Andrew Askandar

    Posted 3 months ago #
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    That is a beautiful poem that you wrote smokeybear. A very insightfull and sensitive person you are. Hang on to her, she is a keeper! If the poem led to your eventual union she too is very insightfull and sensitive. These type of people are rare in this world.

    Thank you Very much Scottishjohn for your very kind words im really touched and i appreciate it.

    Posted 3 months ago #
  16. smokeybear

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    Just wrote this, figured im due for a poem about my pipe.

    Pipe Therapy

    Pack and lite,
    hope for no bite.
    Tamp and Dottle,
    Pour from the Bottle.
    Sit back and smell,
    Ah..All is well"

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  17. rhogg

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    For me poetry is like a mirror that reflects the soul. That is why I quit writing it. When it comes I give in, but I am often left with more questions than answers. Scary to think that you fear your own truths. Sometimes life is easier if it is only lived. Maybe I should continue to let my inner therapist do what he does best. Great thread. I am constantly amazed by the thoughts this place provokes.

    Posted 3 months ago #
  18. hodirty

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    Gotta love that one, smokey. I never could write it, but I sure enjoy it.

    If more of us valued food and cheer and song above hoarded gold, it would be a merrier world.
    J.R.R Tolkien
    Posted 3 months ago #
  19. dizzieranddizzier

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    not mine, but I found this recently:
    For you alone -
    Bob Hicok

    One knows the world is falling
    slightly faster than rising,
    this is why one has the second beer
    or tries to stretch the triple
    into a love affair. One is called out
    at home and asks the ump
    how anyone can know anything
    for sure and is told it's the little hat
    the umpire wears that makes all
    the epistemological difference
    in the world. One is pleased
    by this news and the tails of comets
    and the various enthusiasms of children
    in playgrounds when they gather
    their shrieks into a single
    ululation holding up the sky.
    One knows the sky is not actually
    held up by this joy but one needs
    to take a stab at meaning before meaning
    takes a swing at one. One dreams
    of less violence for oneself and others
    and of growing old with a cane
    because one wants to think
    one is standing in the middle
    of a great party, or that osprey
    are pending, or that love
    something something. One says a lot
    that makes little sense, like one believes
    in peace an hour before one wants
    to punch the Secretary of Defense
    in the nose. But one
    can only speak for oneself
    and others and people
    who don't exist and dogs.

    Posted 3 months ago #

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