PM'ing on PsM.com

It cracks me up. I will make a message that looks like this:
Hello XXXXXX,
I am interested in the tobacco you have listed. I would love to offer you full asking price and will pay the shipping. I am happy that you have had good things going in your life and congrats on winning the lottery, etc.
If you decide to sell other tobacco, I would be very interested.
Hope you have a great day and thanks for being a friend.
Sincerely,
Mike
and it comes out like this:
"Hello XXXXXX, I am interested in the tobacco you have listed. I would love to offer you full asking price and will pay the shipping. I am happy that you have had good things going in your life and congrats on winning the lottery, etc. If you decide to sell other tobacco, I would be very interested. Hope you have a great day and thanks for being a friend. Sincerely, Mike"
I believe that spacing and proper paragraphing helps convey tone in writing. When I read what I wrote all smooshed, I feel like the reader of my message will think I rushed it and was inconsiderate somehow.
It is my birthday today, so I am just messing around asking. I am chuckling as I type this and am not asking it be fixed.