My Lastest Work: My First Pipe Related Poem. What Do You Think?

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smokeybear

Lifer
Dec 21, 2012
2,202
25
Brampton,Ontario,Canada
The Early Riser
Early Riser,yet slow to wake.

With cold water filled hands,

Still remaining sleep,I shake.

With little reserved energy,

I choose what to dress,

to keep up appearances,

for a day undoubtedly,

full of stress.
Bound to this duty,

Charged with this deed.

For I would not do it, Truly.

If i were not in need.

Though the years have made me worthy,

to do my work with pride.

The work would feel no worry,

were tomorrow i have died.
Should life take it's toll,

Then quickly I will tire.

At which time I fill my Bowl

and confide to my Briar.

In a cloud of sweet smoke,

I blow my stress away.

Savoring every toke,

Till rise again next day.

 

dottiewarden

Lifer
Mar 25, 2014
3,053
57
Toronto
Way to go smokeybear! The words "Early Riser" strike close to me because of the song Julian by Alta Moda (1984). I also love pipe smoking poetry; pipes and poetry just go hand in hand.
Thanks for sharing.

 

smokeybear

Lifer
Dec 21, 2012
2,202
25
Brampton,Ontario,Canada
Whoa! Thanks I thought after someone read it...
He'll try to hide from you(me)

He'll try to run away
But your my
Best friend, new friend.
Lol
Glad I brought you back to the '80's although I was just born then I always loved the music from then.

 

puffdoggie

Can't Leave
Dec 14, 2013
398
0
Very nice. I even understand and relate to it as it applies to my pre-retirement days. These days the stress is missing and not missed!
Dave

 

smokeybear

Lifer
Dec 21, 2012
2,202
25
Brampton,Ontario,Canada
I hear you man I spent two weeks pricing a job only for it to go to a low ball big company who can afford to bid low. It's messing with the whole economics of the steel business. I only am relaxed at home with my wife, dog Roscoe and a bowl.

 
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