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crazypipe

Lifer
Sep 23, 2012
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~ I Dreamt Of Fireflies ~
I dreamt of fireflies last night

I felt happy just to be

Awash in magic, faerie light

Such a lovely sight to see
I'm sure I dream in color now

For they shone yellow, like the sun

Flitting to and fro -- oh wow

I loved them, everyone
Flying pixies, lanterns glowing

Each one, a wish fulfilled

Part of me, aware and knowing

They'd only stay until
Slumber's hold grew weak and frail

Enchantment, lost to day

When the night begins to pale

Sweet faeries cannot stay
Within a realm, but for a time

Where ruled cabbages and kings

Entertained by my own mind

I, too, had faerie wings :puffy:

 

mso489

Lifer
Feb 21, 2013
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Some worthy quatrains there, very Nineteenth Century but not affecting

archaic language, which I think works. I think in the second stanza

you mean it to be two words, every one, as in each one.

 

cobguy

Lifer
Oct 18, 2013
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Really nice Teddy!
I grew up in IL and there were always TONS of Fireflies in the summer.

We would collect them in jars and make "lanterns" for our tents.

Here in AZ ... no fireflies! I miss them and your poem hits home.
Thanks for sharing!

 

mso489

Lifer
Feb 21, 2013
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Yeats often wrote of mythical beings and Irish folktales. Those aren't my favorite of Yeats' poems,

but when he crossed that mythological bent with a sort of political sensibility, he achieved some of

the masterworks of modern poetry. My late wife and I visited his ancient tower fortress, which was

home to him, his wife and kids. Luckily, it has a cozy cottage at the base. But my wife looked around

the high stone bedroom in the tower and shook her head and said his wife must have really loved him

(to live in such a home). We also visited his grave, in the rain, there in Sligo, buried there beside his

wife in a churchyard. Yeats and family lived in the tower during some of the Irish armed struggle for

independence. He was a strong supporter of independence despite being a Protestant. I'm rattling

on about Yeats because this poem is reminiscent of some of his work.

 
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